Not as easy as it sounds like it should be, is it? This is not a bad effort, but the piano at the beginning needs a little tidying up.
I've tried, and failed, at this once or twice myself. I wanted to get Freddie and Brian singing the verses each line in turn, each coming out of left and right speakers respectively, and then joining up for the choruses, but it just didn't go right.
Remember to deliver with the speed of light
A little bit of love and joy